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David and Goliath

Titan Goliath challenged young David to a floggin' But David with his slingshot beaned him on the noggin! Dave viewed the carcass and was heard to say, "Nothin' to it!" His envious brethren said, "Yeah! 'Twas just a lucky hit!" Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/28/2012 6:05:00 PM

So clever and well-written.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/27/2012 7:15:00 PM

ha ha ha ha....u are crackin' me up, Mr. Hinshaw! Love the Biblical ones a lot! Trying to listen to the whole Bible on tape bc I have been doing so much driving lately...it is rewarding...Please write me a clerihew on Eli Manning...pretty please? haha...At least me and Michael will like it! :) gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2012 3:34:00 PM

Good written with a smiling heart ... I like it, and I think David will too. - Wish you luck in the contest bob. - Wishing you a good weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/27/2012 10:23:00 AM

this is so good, a short version that tells us all...

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/27/2012 9:01:00 AM

Robert ,I love your verion of this ,funny with the message poem. That with Him, good will win. Ever since you posted the poem about blackberries . I have been meaning to post 'A Great Lady' .I wrote it a long time ago and your poem make me think of posting it. Anne

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/26/2012 8:37:00 PM

Clever, cute and funny...great clerihew Bob! You will put a smile on David's face with this one. Hugs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/26/2012 6:13:00 PM

Great one, Bob! Can u imagine being present for this ultimate duel?...What an entertaining piece...Is there NOTHING that u can't write about?...WOW! :) gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2012 10:05:00 AM

WHAT A REACTION U PRESENT IN A HUMOROUS MANNER BOB .. DAVID THE LITTLE GUY WAS THE HERO AND GOLIATH WAS DEAD CARCASS FOR THE INSECT POPULATION .. WONDERFUL LUV ..

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/26/2012 9:59:00 AM

This is good. I don't think that it was a lucky hit. Have a great weekend. Lucilla

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/26/2012 9:49:00 AM

very clever, dear bob!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2012 7:17:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Bob. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/26/2012 5:08:00 AM

ha ha, yes I can see his brethren saying just that too! But he was glorified nonetheless...as he became King! Great story my friend, I really enjoyed this incredible write, very special indeed! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this morning, Awesome Work!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2012 12:20:00 AM

BIG smile over this humorous Clerihew Robert. Thank you for the cheer!