David, I Just Heard

David, I just heard you'd started writing poetry, so it made my day to get your rhyming note - the first time in this school a note's been passed to me. I always wished a boy like you would like me too. You're smart and cute . I want for you to know I've also had my blue-green eyes on you! I like to dance. Do you? I think that we should meet. I bet that a great dancer you would be, and someone going far in life, for you're so sweet! Written by Andrea Dietrich for Michael Falotico's "Passing a Love Note" Poetry Contest (I imagine this scene when David was 13 and had just started his interest in poetry,and as he wrote in his bio, was also on his way to becoming a ballroom dancer!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/30/2014 12:41:00 PM
Andrea This is so sweet and charming. A delicately passionate and romantic write. Thank you for the great comment on my Never Give Up poem.
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Date: 3/20/2013 6:35:00 AM
Ballroom dancer, eh? David's a charmer ain't he?...ha
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea! I'm playing catch up today. I love the personal touch! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea I am sure he would not have been able to resist it back then. xx
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:31:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a fabulous win for this awesome luv note my friend.. so loved it..
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win in my contest....luv Michael
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea!! big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:14:00 PM
I do hope David received this note and quickly acted on it. And I hope you didn't see him wink at the cute little blond in the third row. Don't worry, though, she isn't half as cute as you are. Your Friend Hephzibah.
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:26:00 AM
sweet love note to david - i bet he's blushing, lol
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:23:00 AM
an adorable write with sweet emotion attached.. dancing always stirs the soul Andrea.. if for the contest good luck luv.. a gem..
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:39:00 PM
Great to read your note passing write Andrea; hope it goes well in the contest,, and on behalf of Gnalsmoobs everywhere... i'm sendig you a kiss..) L O L; i mean't in my comment that i'd been confronted by your words..! however.. i shall not disclose more...until we hopefully meet..) orrr until Dear Carolyn arrives in the U K..! as she has said.. "poor girl" ... it can be your job to counsel her..) afterwards.."yours Joe..;
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Date: 4/3/2012 2:43:00 PM
Wow this is quite the awesome write my friend! I really liked how you created an aura of being 13 again! I tried to do that but I don't think I pulled it off, at least nowhere near as good as you did! I like how you created a mutual interest in poetry, that's really cool! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! I love your poem immensely, Andrea! Great Work!!
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Date: 4/3/2012 1:19:00 PM
Nice not to yir friend! Hope u are good Andrea!
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Date: 4/3/2012 12:55:00 PM
cool exploration of life andrea always p.d.
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Date: 4/3/2012 12:44:00 PM
oh this is really cute..Michael will love it as will David! love,deb
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:33:00 AM
Nice one grandma Andrea. My congrats on your brand new grandson. love phyl
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:22:00 AM
Nice one Andy i can see he liked it so did I, well done xx
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:43:00 AM
Andrea, thanks a million, love it, it cheered me up no end, best of luck..David
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