Date With the Chaperon of Moonlight

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You illuminate our hearts as you brightly smile
A splendid feeling for us lovers in the night
We’re completely snuggled  under your light.

Sitting beside each other at the park with your light
We look at one another lovingly with sincerest smile
Then, our tender kisses filled the cold air of the night.

It turns out to be a very lovely and romantic night
Our most passionate love under your gleaming light
Our love is ablaze in the chaperon of your smile.


Your smile in the night is our best amorous light.



Feb. 25, 2013
Form of Poem: Tritina
©2014by Leonora Galinta



9th Place
Contest: Introducing Tritina ( a new poetry form for you)
Judged: 3/9/13
Poet Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

2nd Place
Contest: Moon and Sea
Judged: 3/13/13
Poet Sponsor: Poet Linda/PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 PM
Light and I love it Leonora. Thank you for stopping by my poem, It has been an honor reading your poem tonight. LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 3/16/2013 5:48:00 PM
Sorry, I'm late Leonora, but congratulations on a very fine win! Beautiful poem! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:52:00 PM
This is gorgeous Leonora ..congratulations...Donna
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:37:00 PM
HI SWEET LEO, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:31:00 PM
congratulations on a fine win Leonora
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Date: 3/10/2013 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend Leonora on your awesome win in Andrea's Contest. Have a nice day. God bless!! hugs from me, Maria
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:42:00 AM
Leonora congrats on your win, very romantic, I like...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:12:00 AM
Love this romantic poem Leonora!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:21:00 AM
ahhh, this romantic one is yours, Leonora!! As I am reading them all again now I am wishing I'd put some of them even higher on the list!! Congrats. I am glad you tried a tritina.
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Date: 3/4/2013 7:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 3/3/2013 10:05:00 PM
Many many congrats for this wonderful win Leonora
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Date: 3/3/2013 3:54:00 PM
hey, I didn't want to see who wrote the tritinas for me before judging, but I can see that yours will be on my list as well. If I ever get around to judging it. haha. Congrats on it winning with PD!
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Date: 3/3/2013 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful!Superb write,dear friend..Congrats on your well deserved win...XOXO...
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Date: 3/3/2013 2:57:00 PM
Leonora congrats on your win....David
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Date: 3/3/2013 11:54:00 AM
Congrats, with your nice lovely win-Skat
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:48:00 AM
Good morning my dearest poet sis... Leonora, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~happy happy ~ PD
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:14:00 AM
yeah,,,, I'm hosting a moon or sea contest... hope this is for my contest... Goodnight sweet sis...xox~PD
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Date: 2/28/2013 4:45:00 PM
Have mercy on an old man Leonora! (I have a heart condition you know)...Very passionate and beautiful write my friend! - Tim
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Date: 2/28/2013 3:31:00 PM
I especially like the last line of this one..If written for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Thanks for stopping by..Your honoring me in two thoughts with the visit and placing in the favs.Great to have the moon as a chaperon.Sara
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Date: 2/28/2013 3:20:00 PM
chaperon? what a forgoten concept.
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Date: 2/28/2013 8:57:00 AM
So romantic, so creative poem of yours my dear Leonora...wish this will put in action soon hehehehe...Love all your poems. mwuah!!! Hugs, Maria
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:53:00 AM
Leonora, it's so lovely and sweet ..... it's really romantic!! <3 <3 <3 - Today you gave me a smile on my lips. :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:37:00 AM
Wow, this is such a beautiful and romantic write my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a dynamic piece you have written here, Great Work!!
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