Darkness

Oh Darkness, How you long to be whole. Darkness fights the light, Darkness black as coal. Only with the light, Can you be known. Yet you seek to block knowledge, The seeds of ignorance you have sewn. Oh Darkness, Hiding the truth, you oppose the few You are the Darkness, The Darkness is in you. __________________ btw does anyone know what type of poem this is?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2010 8:52:00 PM

A person consumed and evershaddowed by darkness,,, a light will eventually seek it's way through....P.D.

Date: 6/23/2010 2:34:00 PM

Graham, Welcome to poetry soup. This poem is very nice to have been written while you were drunk. Oh my.... I would say it's free verse. Thanks for the nice comments on my poem "Wishing".. Scarlett

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/23/2010 12:02:00 PM

I like the flow of words in the poem. The juxtapositioning between darkness and light is very inspiring. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2010 11:52:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Graham. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Charles Smith

Date: 6/23/2010 10:58:00 AM

wow, for being drunk, thats pretty dang good! i would encourage you to enter this in a competition.

Graham Eakin

Date: 6/23/2010 9:16:00 AM

thanks, came up with it while i was drunk last night.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/23/2010 9:10:00 AM

Nice thoughts on light and darkness

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 6/23/2010 8:58:00 AM

only with the light can you be known, but darkness blocks this knowledge, like that line, hmm idk maybe check the forms of poetry and put the one that matches best :)