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darker than raindrops

darker than raindrops
mushroom cloud blooming purple....
I can see my bones

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  1. Date: 3/2/2011 8:26:00 AM
    Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win to my other comment. The vivid imagery grabs the reader's attention. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for the kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 7:52:00 AM
    Dear Gerard....I am so sorry to hear of your father's death...and the other issues that have afflicted your family, ...just know my heart goes out to you with love and prayers at such a difficult time. love, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 2:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 6:24:00 AM
    Hi Gerard - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:46:00 PM
    congradulations on your win. T. S.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:34:00 PM
    I loved your reference here, GErard. VERY imaginative. Conrats on the winner circle. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Agree with u on all points Gerard... the Jets have to come out striking and get on the board quickly... and maintain the lead... the Steelers just need to play bad..haha..I have a bet with my husband so I don't like to lose luv.. so am counting on them guys in green and white.. I heard Namath was twitting all day with sports guys encouraging the Jets players on...last time they won was Super Bowl III when JWN guaranteed a win.. and did ..luv..

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:27:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Gerard

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:11:00 PM
    I hope that your prediction does not come true..Enjoyed your work..Very creative on your part..Your interpertation of my work helped me get a laugh out of my own work..Saw a Cialis add then thought about so many people have to get artificial joints..Knee, hips, and I guess that are others..I know that there are all kinds of repairs on this and on that..So I go what if the Viagra works but the joint fails..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:34:00 PM
    If we ever witness this terrible cloud. Our bones may be the last we ever see. Many congratulations on your win Gerard....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 6:02:00 AM
    Congrats Gerard my friend on your fantastic win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry my friend... enjoy sweet success once again.. and let me cheer those New York Jets on one more week to defeat Steelers luv.. Who do u like?

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:48:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Gerard, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:52:00 AM
    Wow, stunning entry.. congratulations Gerard :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 9:36:00 PM
    Congratulations, Gerard !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:27:00 PM
    Interesting perspective in the concise poem. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 2:05:00 PM
    WOW, a big 7 for this one!!

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 5:15:00 AM
    This has to go to mine favz Sir ! Great Haiku dear poet...really good write ! much love, james

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 1:23:00 AM
    real edgy, edgy, gerard! this gave me goosebumps! best wishes in the contest..:) nette

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 10:43:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest,..p.d.