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Dare Not

Nothing is wrong Nothing is right I share my thoughts With people who only share my fight Puddle in the past Dare not to look back How easy it is to do with, than out Closed in Sealed tight I keep myselve in a bottle As I tick away Im loaded Not with vaule for I have none Im a bomb Waiting to be undone Floating in space Crack in the glass I can't breathe Its something that doesnt just pass A search to the end Put forth all my devotion Looking for some meaning Finding my way to the bottom of the ocean But this just happens to be me A sailor lost at sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/28/2010 11:57:00 AM
Quite interesting a write, Kayla! Hope you got your compass. If you do, you'll find your way to that place of meaning. Your description and imagery is very good, so is your rhyming. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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