Dance Across the Sky

I 
                                                    will 
                                                  dance 
                                               as the sun 
                                          dances cross the 
                                       sky o'er blue my tail 
                                    flapping in the wind I live
                                I say goodbye to the earth free
                               floating, breaking from my string,
                                 dancing further than east from
                                    west, sun from moon, ever
                                      my colors to soar above
                                        lands, I cannot begin
                                          my flight too soon,
                                            a kite is meant
                                              to fly, said I
                                                dreaming  
                                                  happily
                                                    will 
                                                      I                                                        
                                                      F
                                                       L
                                                        Y
                                                        H 
                                                        I
                                 H                  G
                                 G                H
                                  I.   A        E
                                  H N H T R  


                                                       
 Dedicated to all the wonderful poets on Poetry Soup. I cannot choose one. I only started my journey here not too long ago, and I have received so much amazing support. So thanks to everyone who takes the time to give a kind word. Lots of love to all. :))

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Date: 4/19/2012 6:28:00 PM
Well who could help but..help you..such a sweet, kind & loving person yourself!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:57:00 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning place Rhonda xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this high flyer of a well placed contest write Rhonda..)
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 10:04:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda!! well done my dear friend!! beautiful...big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:14:00 PM
wow! you really nailed the shape on this one and it sounds great, too! congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/15/2012 6:35:00 PM
A footloose and fancy free shape poem, Rhonda! Congrats on your placement in my contest...your work is always appreciated by ME!! Wonderful personification. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
wow. very exciting work, you've stretched creativity in thought and form, good for you, chuck
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Date: 3/30/2012 10:25:00 AM
Love the personification and the shape, Rhonda. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/30/2012 9:49:00 AM
Oh well done Rhonda..awesome shape poem..love it xxx Hugs
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