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Damnation

Do not look me in the eyes and say goodbye. i am not strong. i have no hold over myself. You are the lullaby i hear in the distant shores. You are the tale that`s etched on my palm. You are the pine in my eyes, the lamp that`s lit for me. Thus do not look me in the eyes and say goodbye. i am not strong. I have no hold over myself. I can not live without you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2010 11:44:00 AM
Oh the damnation we feel when love decides to take a vacation. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2009 10:03:00 AM
Ahhh my dear you are driving me coocoo. 4 lines/4lines/4lines/2 lines sonnet form without even keeping to the normal meter. LOVELY, lovely verse as always why not just say free verse? Light & Love
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Date: 5/28/2009 3:52:00 PM
Gently you reflect your sadness. This poem is like "the lullaby I hear" when someone I love leaves my life. Always we think we cannot live without them, but somehow we manage to survive to write away our pain in beautiful verse like this. Very nice, k k! Love, Carolyn
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