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Daily Routine

Morning sun rising Battling fierce rebellious clouds Perpetual feud

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  1. Date: 9/26/2009 5:31:00 AM
    I love this, Abe! So true to life and reality! Thanks for sharing your work for us to enjoy! Ladybug12

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 8:00:00 PM
    perpetual feud, I like it. we have really been having the battle here for about 2 weeks ,one minute it is raining and then it is sunny.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:34:00 PM
    Another battle of the skies please's mine eye, excellent Abe>>James

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 2:57:00 AM
    Amazing image of the sun fightin away the "rebellious clouds," Abe. Instead of "Abe," I would like to call you "Ace." You always hit the mark and I can't wait for your book to be released. This is an awesome haiku! Love you! Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 1:21:00 PM
    Abe this is one of the best haiku's I believe I have read - One thing though bro in the haiku the first words shouldn't be capitalized - other than that this is perfect Abe - God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 6:19:00 AM
    Daily Routine with a difference here..Daily routine in verses--well penned--Charma:)

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 4:07:00 PM
    So orginal Abe......who came out the winner?!! Do you need sunblock or an umbrella???!!

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 1:01:00 PM
    nice how u put it love it!

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 12:36:00 PM
    Love that middle line...

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 11:25:00 AM
    Thats the way Abe tell it like it is. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 11:20:00 AM
    A beautiful routine it is, those morning rays fight to shine through a cumulous mass, a favorite sight of mine to see...Raul

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 10:42:00 AM
    Very cleverly put. Sara

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 9:09:00 AM
    Truth in such few words. Again I have been totally enjoying how everybody has been ending their poems so strongly. Very nice!

  1. Date: 9/4/2009 8:37:00 AM
    We should revise the Soup's monarchic titles, Abe! : ) This Haiku is magnificent! Ruben.