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Daddy

A father is someone that holds your hand at the fair makes sure you do what your mother says holds back your hair when you are sick brushes that hair when it is tangled because mother is too busy lets you eat ice cream for breakfast but only when mother is away he walks you down the aisle and tells you everythings gonna be ok

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Date: 10/3/2010 7:08:00 AM
Great father that you had in your life..If the world only had more fathers whose children were that important in their lives..Sara
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Date: 9/17/2010 3:28:00 PM
My Daddy was like this Audrey..he died too young and is very missed in the physical sense ... enjoyed this piece very much..luv..
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:12:00 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 4:23:00 PM
A wonderful Father, Audrey..Make sure that you tell him that you love him everyday!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:16:00 PM
............wonderful father that is...
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:16:00 PM
Hello their Little, Audrey! You are so right a father is the biggest trauma in life,, he fixes and breakes things.., But when the going gets tough he is the one there for you. In all your falls. Enjoyed your poem*~luv~ME..p.d.
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