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A father is someone that 
holds your hand at the fair
makes sure you do what your mother says
holds back your hair when you are sick
brushes that hair when it is tangled because mother is too busy
lets you eat ice cream for breakfast 
but only when mother is away
he walks you down the aisle
and tells you everythings gonna be ok 

Copyright © audrey castaneda

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  1. Date: 10/3/2010 7:08:00 AM
    Great father that you had in your life..If the world only had more fathers whose children were that important in their lives..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 3:28:00 PM
    My Daddy was like this Audrey..he died too young and is very missed in the physical sense ... enjoyed this piece very much..luv..

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 9:12:00 AM
    As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 4:23:00 PM
    A wonderful Father, Audrey..Make sure that you tell him that you love him everyday!! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 3:16:00 PM
    ............wonderful father that is...

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 3:16:00 PM
    Hello their Little, Audrey! You are so right a father is the biggest trauma in life,, he fixes and breakes things.., But when the going gets tough he is the one there for you. In all your falls. Enjoyed your poem*~luv~ME..p.d.