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Curly Part I

Curly ( Part I ) Once upon a time there was a little girl, that lived with her mother, her father and her brother. She was only seven years old. her brother was eight years older then her. mary was this little girl's name. She was happy, but she had no one to play with. One day her father had gone to work as he always had. Later that day - it started to rain very hard. her father and his friend had to work outside. they saw two little puppies playing and rolling in the mud. They each got one puppy, They were far away from any houses. Mary's father said - I'll take this one to my daughter. When he got home and Mary saw the puppy, her eyes opened wide with joy. she told her father - I hope you got him for me and not for my brother. Her father said - of course my darling daughter, I got him for you. The little puppy was very dirty. Mary said - I'll give him a bath so I can see his color. after the bath she saw that the little puppy was very pretty. He was white as snow. Her father asked - what will you name him? she said - I thought maybe snow. Then she saw a black spot on his forehead and said I don't know. When the little puppy was all dried up he was waggling his tail. She could tell he was happy. She also saw that he was full of curls. she couldn't even see his eyes. She then thought to herself - I got the perfect name for him. I will name him Curly, just like he's always been. She then went to tell her family. His name shall be Curly. Everybody agreed that that was a perfect name.....
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo To be continued

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 9:17:00 AM
    They should have gotten two more puppies and named them Moe and Larry. Interesting write. Now I have to see part two.

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 5:58:00 PM
    going to part 2

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:53:00 PM
    love it

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:15:00 AM
    This poem has a very warming feel to it- I really like it, Lucilla. :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Very nice write thank you for sharing. It's quite touching.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:40:00 AM
    - - - Cute: part 1 - - -

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Oh enjoying this Lucilla, going to part 2 very soon....

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:08:00 PM
    You have written a very enlightening and fabulous write my friend! This is a sentimental poem, one that makes me want to see where you will take us from here! I thoroughly loved this compassionate piece here Lucilla! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!