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Cupid's Arrow

love dart
we got

go slow 
oh no

wow date
loves bait

love you
so new

why wait 
soul mate

girlfriend-boyfriendlovefootle

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Janet Grace

Date: 11/2/2019 2:09:00 PM

Well, that beats online dating!

Tenysha Thurman

Date: 2/22/2012 1:50:00 AM

so cute, you've caught every emotion the first glance, the flirting, the moment of butterflies, and finally love .. too great

James Fraser

Date: 2/19/2012 9:42:00 AM

Nice Footle Carol, and many of us will have lived it. Have a most wonderful Sunday :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2012 6:33:00 PM

shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! lol... why wait... good one... Hi... awesome avatar...this was a very xool footle to read... thank you for sharing...always~ ;-) PD

Liz Walsh

Date: 2/16/2012 11:54:00 AM

Great Carol - very clever! I hope that you are keeping well and that life is good! Liz

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/16/2012 8:01:00 AM

when it's right it's right! great description :) hope you are feeling better about soup.

Milton Toran

Date: 2/15/2012 3:21:00 PM

Fun, fun, fun!....Milt

Jack Horne

Date: 2/15/2012 1:14:00 PM

Love these cute footles, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/15/2012 5:10:00 AM

SOUP MAIL

Roman Chebukin

Date: 2/15/2012 2:01:00 AM

Short, Simple, and Sweet. very lovely write girl. VDay was bad but this made me smile. thank you for making me smile tonight in this lonely hour in Alaska.

Richard Mcclellan

Date: 2/15/2012 12:23:00 AM

That is a cute poem Carol, better late than never!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/15/2012 5:11:00 AM

Amen to that! Smiles.

Esson Alumbugu

Date: 2/14/2012 10:41:00 PM

CAROL you still are the queen of the house. Nice work!

Shirley Long

Date: 2/14/2012 7:30:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this poem, it is good.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2012 3:24:00 PM

Ah yes, you did a wonderful job with these Footles! You got this form completely Carol! I loved this Footle: "why wait, soul make" that turns out to be your best in my opinion! However, they are all very good! Awesome Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2012 11:15:00 AM

Enjoyed them all..It is good thing that you feel this way after a number of years of marriage..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Happy Valentine's Day..May this be the greats one up to this point in your life..Sara