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On the sun-deck I saw two big clouds a man one
and a female, they met kissed and the man cloud
was transformed into a plucked chicken.
 Not that the female cloud fared better for behind 
her came huge troll cloud that absorbed her up its 
nostrils. In the world of clouds you never see 
the same formation twice, in this immaterial ever 
changing world; it is as the saying goes: You can´t 
cross the same river twice. Now a massive dark cloud
erased the picture, and as I didn´t want a drab cloud 
hanging over me, I got up walked into the galley and 
had a mug of coffee, while the cook fried pork chops.   

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:26:00 AM
    The weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Jan. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. You sure made my day with this write. Love, Carol

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 9/7/2012 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carol
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Jan - What????????? love, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 9/7/2012 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bit of fun dear kathy