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Crystal City

Little white specks Spiral downward From a threatening sky Swirling and Glistening It's a crystal city Little white specks Continue to fall Finally landing Piling on top of each other Forming little crystal mounds Little white specks Looking so beautiful

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 2/6/2009 2:02:00 PM

It's enchanting to watch the snow fall. I could watch it for hours! Thank you for this lovely poem. And thank you for you lovely comment on my new poem Acceptance. It's hard enough being a kid without other kids poking fun.. If you like that, you should read my poem Last in Line...it's an extended version.