Crystal Chariot

she wore a shiny crown that sparkled from a million miles away
she drove her battle horses and whipped them all like slaves
blue skies all turned black as she came
trumpets blasted tormented tunes...her laughter was insane
eyes of evil hypnotized me as she flew into my presence
she captured and confined me on her crystal chariot

no exit or escape from her grip or gruesome grasp
as i struggled and i strangled like a lunatic she laughed
as the horses flew higher i thought it was a dream till she stripped my soul bare with a nod and a wink...my heart sinks
i'm shackled and chained to this cold conquest queen
now i'm killed by her kiss as she swallows my seed
like wicked weeds wrapped around a skeletons cranium i just can't break free from her crystal chariot

around and around and where it stops only God knows
now the horses are breathing fire and like bombs all set to blow
we descend into darkness as an inferno ignites
surrounded by smoke now we fall in the fire
her tongue starts to twist and her skin starts to sizzle...in a shrinking machine once large now i'm little
she pulls the bits and bridles and just flies away
my muscles won't move but my heart wants to chase...that hellbound harlot on the crystal chariot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/25/2010 9:43:00 AM
amazing Anthony,, your tales are told so well,,, i will always enjoy the way you flaunt your amazing writes with passion that is bright, but full of deep and dark words,..p.d.
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Date: 12/15/2010 11:47:00 PM
Whew what a dream encounter for you Anthony - the detail somewhat hot! I do hope your feverish advances have been chilled somewhat with cold shower! lol. My, my, my.... wasn't expecting that one! lol. Cgristmas and New Year 2011 wishes to you and yours!
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