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Cry Ye Fallen Angels

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Cry Ye Fallen Angels

Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay Chasing sins of heartache with each new passing day Angels decending,bring from above, Echoes of mercy,whispers of love Low you have fallen,dim shines your light Decending to earth your wings burning in flight Whispers of love shall be heard no more Mercy but an echo where you once soared Cry ye fallen angels a world of pain with each tear Chasing sins of heartache for a creator we all fear Angels decending,bring from above, Echoes of mercy,whispers of love
Dan Kearley:2-16-12 Contest:Fallen Angels

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Really a special one Dan; the fallen angels are not talked about much but it is quite a story. You did a great write with this one!

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:15:00 PM
    serve in heaven or rule in hell. satan was given a place where we are as well. the circle of life revolves around the world. and thousands of souls died and rerose. not yet finding the escape. they just keep coming back, untill the end of the world.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 12:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win! This is truely a brilliant piece.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 5:58:00 AM
    There ye go me bucko! fav line [Cry ye fallen angels low your heads lay] the repeated use of the word LOW in different places with different meaning is very skilled! Light & Love Debbie

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest *Dan*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 10:54:00 AM
    This poem really reached out and took ahold of me, this is a piece of art.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 9:59:00 AM
    Andrea is right in her comments below...I couldn't put words to describe why I liked this one so much....she hit the nail on the head! (Darn, she is brilliant!!) haha. Hope you are enjoying this poem's success, Dan. A big high five for you, bro.....Hey, how'd the roller skating poem do?...I really loved that one! I still am on a Moonlight Skate!! lol.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:46:00 PM
    I love the way you did your entry, Dan. A very well deserved win. You did not romanticize the fallen angel nor define him cruelly. It was just the right amount of emotion. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:16:00 PM
    "Congrats" This was a well deserved 1 place win:)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:39:00 PM
    fallen angels is a hard subject could have been Lucifer aye? Soup mail Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:50:00 PM
    Thank you all for your congrats on my poem. There were alot of great writes out there,I still can't believe it won? :o) Ha,ha

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/19/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You have!!!!
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Way to go Dan, couldn't have happened to a better man, congrats. on your 1st place win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Dan.Congrats on your 1st place win.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your super win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Dan, beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Dan on this fine write , Declan ...

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Such a lovely and serene poem, Dan! A big congratulations!!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win with this stunning number, Dan. Enjoyed this a lot. The poem keeps message to find out somehow. :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Your poem has a song playing in its background of the old hymn book from my church...I love that this won first place, Dan. You took the picture from the contest and really demonstrated your writing craft well. A new fav for me! Congrats. You really earned this one. Gwendolen