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Cry in the Rain

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Cry in the Rain

Go cry in the rain
Go live out that cliche
Show the world your pain
Take a minute to pray

Bloodshot your eyes

Nobody hears your cries
Believe those lies

You cry so unattractively
You're breathing so hard
Change your mood drastically

Confuse the dead
Smile instead

Look for the good times ahead

Turn it around
Show the world your pain
Get off the ground
Cry in the rain

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 2:57:00 PM
    crying is healthy. and shorten the greiving time.

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 7:38:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Lily. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 4:55:00 AM
    Nice but don't cry yaar...it would be crazy..y..y.

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 2:24:00 AM
    Yes Lily, look for the good times - do not cry in the rain. - well written, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 9:12:00 PM
    HI; I like this poem. Some years ago I wrote a poem called Rain. It was my first poem that I sent in and it got accepted. In my poem I mention crying in the rain. That's where we can do our best crying. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla