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Cry

Michael Dom Avatar Michael Dom - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Cry which was written by poet Michael Dom. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cry

GOD! 
WHAT AM I?
What Am I?  what am i?…

I am less than I hoped to be
 Not, what I dreamed to be.

I am
Perfectly flawed
And framed in pain.

I have wasted my flesh
Chasing rashly, fantasies
I wished to posses

Torment is my brother
And loneliness
My closest friend

I am sinking 
Deeper and deeper
Near the end

END!

I Want It To End.
The torture,
God! Let it end, let it end…
How long, how long, …

How long will it go on 
And it was wrong
So very wrong
Again and again and again.

I am, I am
Perfectly flawed
And framed in pain.

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  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:53:00 PM
    very nice and i can feel the hot shower

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Michael...I appreciate your comments on some of my poems so I flew over here to check you out...I am relatively new on soup and do not know very many people yet...anyway..this is awesome....and how we all feel sometimes...as in my will the sun ever show....but your last line..framed in pain...is magnificent! ..Donna

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 3/31/2013 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Donna, glad you stopped by. cheers!
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 5:09:00 PM
    I'm reading this one again,,, somehow the ending seems to be the story of my life... perfectly flawed, and framed in pain.... pd

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 3/22/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dear PD, if that is so then you are the epitome of Beauty.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Michael excellent piece...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win:) Great write!!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Michael. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 3/14/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey PD, I'm laping it up! Cheers:-)
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:24:00 PM
    MIchael, this is awesome, and I sure hope it is not reflective of how you feel about your own self because we are all of us flawed but hopefully not too many are in pain! I loved the way you patterned this too, bringing us back to the third stanza again with the ending.

    Dom Avatar Michael Dom
    Date: 3/14/2013 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm grand Andrea. Cheers!
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:09:00 AM
    It is a poem that cries and hopes all at the same time, he hears you my dear friend, and know that you are perfectly made to his image. You own all the rare and beautiful gifts he bestowed on you the day you were born. Rise oh gentle man and be born again into the earth, water, fire and air. Thanks for the kind visit on my page, can't wait to read more of your precious story. Have a blessed day Michael Dim, hugs and kisses xxx