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Cruising With the Magic Mat

On a magic mat cruising over seas with friends to enjoy this fresh scenes of nature;sun blazing, like kite and eagle,we glide. As it moves across the forest,hills and valleys 'Wow!' I almost fall Deb and Gwen smiled at its speed The feeling is simply.. cool!. Contest:"Magic "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/5/2012 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
O.A. , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:50:00 PM
OLUSEGUN, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD=
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:02:00 PM
Hope Deb and Gwen enjoyed that ride as much as you did Olu. Congrats on a big win! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/1/2012 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations Olusegun what a wonderful ride and win xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 4:38:00 PM
Winner for sure..Glad that I stopped by...Sara
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Date: 8/8/2012 4:07:00 AM
Good write Segun. Thanks so much for your advice. Pls, check the poem and see if it's okay now. Thanks
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:37:00 PM
this is a really fun read. I can see those two poets looking up at you on your magic carpet!!!
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