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Cruising to Insanity

 Cruising To Insanity

I did it! I finally got a newer car and I am very proud
Calling my friends and family now, to tell them so out loud

Its green, has a sunroof, just perfect, just for me
PT Cruiser is my car that has made me so very happy!

A little bit bumpy, but I’m told because it’s a box car
Don’t know if I could take, all that jumping if I drive far

What? A flat? I must have ran over glass or a nail
Will get it fixed because I don’t want to catch the train rail

Again? It’s flat? Well how can that be?
Don’t know why, maybe the tires are faulty

No, something’s wrong, this happens every week
Tires are good but there seems to be a slow leak

Maybe someone’s letting out the air in my tires
I wish they would stop because my temperature’s on fire!

Four times this month, I have to find the blue book
So I go to the computer just to take a look

Most complaints written, were about the tires losing air
Not my new baby that I was bragging about here & there!

Wow! There you go! This car had me saying profanity
But now I know it’s the tires, which had me cruising to insanity!

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  1. Date: 8/30/2011 8:03:00 AM
    So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Celeste. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol