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Crude Blanket

Untrue black feathers
Crawling in a charcoal bed
Drenched in slick darkness

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  1. Date: 5/20/2010 8:19:00 PM
    NIce one. Congratulations, Savannah!

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 12:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Savannah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 6:15:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 8:43:00 PM
    Congratulation on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 6:01:00 PM
    SHBM... You have a good eye! I think you described everything in sight. This is a lonely creature that makes us feel sadness. I hope they find a way to correct the situation...but I fear the worst. RAY

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 5:40:00 PM
    A winner indeed~~congrats to you ~dont want to tell, you told you so!!!!!LOL ~~Blessing to you~Rick

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 1:09:00 PM
    Congrats S.H. on your winning poem in the Tainted Feathers contest with this awesome write depicting the photo presented so perfectly .. enjoy your top ten win.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 12:13:00 AM
    Savannah, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 3:19:00 PM
    Great Title and Haiku SHBM, Good Luck!! Jeralynn

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 2:47:00 PM
    This one should do incrediably well, like the comments below suggest. I like the entire premise of this Haiku....It begins with 'untrue' and ends in 'darkness.' Powerful way to shed light on this despicable destruction of animals that are innocent within our human greed. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 2:42:00 PM
    This is indeed a winner!!! :) Keeping my fingers crossed for this one!!

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 12:54:00 PM
    perfecto~such impacting words~nice depiction~a top list finisher indeed!!!~Rick