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Below is the poem entitled Crows which was written by poet Pontus Olin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Circling like black crows

On languid farmland thermals

Murder of deadlines

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  1. Date: 3/25/2014 11:22:00 AM
    Wonderful..oh those deadlines. you do know your short forms! BG

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:58:00 AM
    another nice one, xxx

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 5:11:00 AM
    Thanks for the kind words everyone. Glad to be recognized. Even though getting in at 11th place isn't quite a win the way I see it, but that just gives me something to strive for in the future. :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 4:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Pontus xx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:34:00 PM
    Pontus, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:16:00 AM
    One again a fine write. Rick

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Pontus, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
    PONTUS , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Thanks for the welcome and the kind comments!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Welcome to poetry soup, ejoyed reading your senryu, John