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crowned beauty

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crowned beauty

As the clock ticks 
echo carries within 
striking deep keys 
touching one soul 
flowing in feelings 
emotions swelling 
plays a sweet tune 
softly it sings 

in the deepest ocean 
you are a pearl 
of a goddess 
within two hearts 
a tide 
of precious feelings 
softy washed 
one treasure 

a beauty 
crowned queen 
sitting upon 
the throne 
within one heart 
golden shining 
beautiful love

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  1. Date: 10/26/2014 8:52:00 AM
    Liam a wonderful tribute to a lovely special love you share with your special someone, Congrads your a lucky man to find your life mate many lonely souls never have such good luck, I'm glad you like my docks so much cheri

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    Date: 10/26/2014 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cherl i am one of those lonely souls this i wrote to someone special even she hurt me yeah cherl love reading your pieces every story is different i must say and very enjoyable reads
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Liam This is a loving tribute to someone special. The reader is taken on a journey of care and devotion from beginning to end. Nice job

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:26:00 PM
    the title is very fitting for this tribute to beauty.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Hey Liam, Some good romantic stuff here.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:36:00 PM
    - Sweet love is like beautiful music ...... never get tired of listening. - Beautiful, Liam!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 8:35:00 AM
    A beautiful song of love....enchanting

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:31:00 PM
    I could feel the intensity of your love for her in every line... A stunning work of art! Blessing dear Liam

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Liam this was sincerely a compliment to any woman!

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:19:00 PM
    This is so beautifully and tenderly written my friend Liam! Why have I not read your poems before... I will from now on! A beautiful write...

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:50:00 PM
    You write wonderful words Liam, you must have all the women fighting to get to you. well done, My friend...peter

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:40:00 PM
    This is so beautiful..You.must be the knight in shining armour who steals the heart of the queen with such romantic verse..So very beautiful Liam..Very gentle and tender.