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Crowned Beauty

As the clock ticks echo carries within striking deep keys touching one soul flowing in feelings emotions swelling plays a sweet tune softly it sings in the deepest ocean you are a pearl of a goddess within two hearts a tide of precious feelings softy washed one treasure a beauty crowned queen sitting upon the throne within one heart golden shining beautiful love

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/26/2014 8:52:00 AM

Liam a wonderful tribute to a lovely special love you share with your special someone, Congrads your a lucky man to find your life mate many lonely souls never have such good luck, I'm glad you like my docks so much cheri

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/26/2014 9:45:00 AM

cherl i am one of those lonely souls this i wrote to someone special even she hurt me yeah cherl love reading your pieces every story is different i must say and very enjoyable reads

Robin Davis

Date: 11/4/2013 7:08:00 PM

Liam This is a loving tribute to someone special. The reader is taken on a journey of care and devotion from beginning to end. Nice job

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 6:26:00 PM

the title is very fitting for this tribute to beauty.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/31/2013 1:41:00 PM

Hey Liam, Some good romantic stuff here.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2013 1:36:00 PM

- Sweet love is like beautiful music ...... never get tired of listening. - Beautiful, Liam!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/31/2013 8:35:00 AM

A beautiful song of love....enchanting

Sarai Virden

Date: 10/30/2013 7:31:00 PM

I could feel the intensity of your love for her in every line... A stunning work of art! Blessing dear Liam

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/30/2013 5:19:00 PM

This is so beautifully and tenderly written my friend Liam! Why have I not read your poems before... I will from now on! A beautiful write...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/30/2013 4:40:00 PM

This is so beautiful..You.must be the knight in shining armour who steals the heart of the queen with such romantic verse..So very beautiful Liam..Very gentle and tender.