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Cross the Bridge Cautiously - Tercets

To the wings of our dove, there is rosy parity Fated to meet when the light meets the dark Between us there is a bridge of love of solidity As excited, I reached the bridge with hilarity Hovering above me were dark clouds, Hark! My eyes fixed on the other side with sere anxiety. Standing on middle of the bridge with vivacity Over her hamlet saw the firework’s sparks Celebrating a wedding with awesome gaiety. For the moment I thought it to be in her dignity Was ready to burn the bridge between us as a mark But later on learn it wasn’t her wedding in reality. It was a life’s lesson not to burn bridge in adversity Who knows if you burn the bridge in haste and hark You may have to cross it again in your diversity .
==================================== Date : 26-10-13 Dr. Ram Mehta 5th place win Contest: Crossing that bridge by Deb Wilson

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Date: 11/7/2013 10:52:00 PM
hello Dr. ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:25:00 AM
congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:22:00 AM
I am impressed Dr. Ram, great job. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:03:00 AM
Very wise Ram, Congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 11/7/2013 5:03:00 AM
congrats Dr. Ram on your placement!
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Date: 11/6/2013 11:12:00 PM
Bridges are much more useful when we build them, instead of burning them! A very thought provoking poem. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it!
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:43:00 PM
As soon as bridges are burned it seems a need arises to traverse the chasm once again... Ashes from bridges burned almost always fall into troubled waters..... Congrats on your win.... Jake
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Date: 11/6/2013 6:46:00 PM
DR RAM, Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 11:08:00 AM
.. special cheers on your win, dr.ram..:) huggs
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:16:00 AM
well written, my friend, with a hint of Karma ..... Good luck in your entry.... Jake
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:58:00 PM
....wise and beautiful all together... Fond greetings, SuZ
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:30:00 AM
An excellent and clever poem Dr-Tnks for stopping by my humble verse. Charma
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Date: 10/27/2013 4:40:00 PM
A very precious lesson!
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Date: 10/27/2013 7:59:00 AM
I really enjoyed this thought provoking emotional piece. I also liked the form.
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Date: 10/26/2013 6:08:00 AM
- Here you have posted a   winning poem Dr. Ram. !!!!! - Well done !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2013 5:23:00 AM
On bridge nice focus with a tercet form...All the best
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Date: 10/26/2013 1:36:00 AM
I like the interesting tercet form of this poetry. It's a difficult one to do and you have some good lines in it.
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