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Croaking,my song

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Croaking,my song

Deep in to the woods by spring
my quest by daybreak for croaking, 
frog croaking, nature enthusiast‘s song,
hit upon by the fag end, a puddle,
frogs, a few in high spirits hopping,
something took the winds out of my sails!
whopping snake, old inactive by water,
these frogs take the snake a worm,
took me back to an old proverb:
when the snakes get old, 
the frogs get him by the balls!
laughing I too tried some croaking! 
great nap my song all around!

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  1. Date: 3/16/2014 12:10:00 PM
    Hi, Where are you my friend,, miss you... Jenish.... :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:05:00 PM
    Not much seen on the PS, Busy? Jenish.Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it,

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 1:12:00 PM
    The old snake I am has lost his balls and is doing a lot of croaking. Like this one. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 10:09:00 AM
    Poet Undertaker, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~