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Criminal

I witnessed a crime. The suspect was a young girl Be On The Lookout- -She wore a rasberry beret the sort of thing you find in a second hand store -She was a brown eyed girl with a wiggle in her walk and a giggle in her talk I swear to god she had kaleidescope eyes.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2009 7:40:00 PM

Ingenious .. this one.. u got all the good singing artists in this one.. great poetry from your pen... enjoyed... legendary... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/14/2009 11:39:00 AM

I love the kaleidescope eyes! This was an enjoyable read. Smiles, Dane Ann

P Sheart

Date: 11/6/2009 3:10:00 PM

Excellent storyline, truly enjoyed. Guess you'll never forget that girl with the kaleidescope eyes. Feel for her crime though. Those things get resoved within one way or another....Thanks for the wonderful read Geoffery and for sharing. Take care Love Light Patty

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2009 3:06:00 PM

Excellent work..Charma

Sara Lokken

Date: 11/6/2009 2:44:00 PM

That's a very sad reality for her....I am sure she would be so grateful. Best wishes, Sara