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Cricket Serenade

Windowsill love song,
The mariachi crickets:
Serenade the night.

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  1. Date: 10/3/2009 9:10:00 AM
    I can hear the night music in this haiku Raul, you have given this haiku a great vibrancy, I have been taken on a journey by reading this.

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 2:34:00 AM
    The visuals of this piece are awesome, one could almost hear the night serenade of your talented mariachi crickets. Excellent figurative language. It is indeed a pleasure to have read such a fine haiku. I thank you Raul for sharing the read and for reading 'The Mulberry Tree' I truly appreciate it. God Bless, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 10:38:00 PM
    very IMPRESSIVE bro! I must admitt that I was thinking of writing one of those crickets haiku yesterday, but no rush anymore cause you just hit the spot dude. I guess we were on the same page. All I have to say is FLAWLESS!

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 12:00:00 PM
    Nicely written Haiku, Raul! I still hear the crickets from the past in the highlands. ...Gert

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 10:41:00 AM
    Lovely I hear them singing now! Laura :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 12:14:00 PM
    i love the mariachi crickets thing i can see their trumpets and sombreros love thiis write

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 7:48:00 AM
    The second line is a winner....I can see them with big hats and oversized this.

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 6:09:00 AM
    Awesome write Raul. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 7:36:00 PM
    Having been the outdoor type, in my younger days, I relate very close to this Haiku. Enjoyed it very much, Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 6:43:00 PM
    much fun! Raul!...line 2 is my fav!... jim

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 4:43:00 PM
    those crickets can get loud when you can't sleep, though I love the night calls.

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 2:47:00 PM
    great one raul .. the sound of the cricket is beautiful at night .. so relaxing and joyful .. i can enjoy these serenades when i need to be alone to set my mind right .. love this one . Marco

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 2:45:00 PM
    Hi Raul A beautiful serenade it is too! I can hear them..Well, here in Alaska we don't have crickets but...I still here them ha! A wonderful Haiku. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 2:39:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Raul, i would love to hear the sounds of the crickets, maybe one day>>James

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:04:00 PM
    Nicely done Haiku, Raul. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:58:00 PM
    Awesome! And thanks for your comments! Hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:49:00 PM
    and you amuse me too with this crickety sound-Charma

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:12:00 PM
    You always bring something to amuse me; great piece, Raul. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:11:00 PM
    You always bring something to amuse me; great piece, Raul. Ruben.