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Cresent Moon and Orion's Belt

As fog coats the trees 'pon the hill And crickets voices resound A coolness presses on being An eerie feeling now found Could it be the two animals 'Pon my lap playing games Or the raven cawing warnings As the sun rises again Early this morn a cresent moon Close to Orion's Belt Graced the sky above me_the fog gone Stars so close their heat felt This day has hopes of being great Filled with awe all around From singing of the Mockingbird To the dew 'pon the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/30/2013 3:56:00 PM
Hello Sara what a glowing piece you have created here, I could never tire of the scenery you have described..' wonderful indeed.!
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:47:00 AM
A very nice poem, Sara. What two animals are on your lap? Pet doggies? Or kitties? I love the last stanza of this one.
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:13:00 AM
delighted by the poetic mood of your moment, sara...milky way streams with you.. truly beautiful..:) huggs
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:47:00 PM
if the day were half as beautiful as this poem it would be amazing....wonderful poem Sara :)
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Date: 9/27/2013 5:58:00 PM
This sounds like the start of a very beautiful day my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendously wondrous poem this evening! You surely have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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