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Creatures of Relief

head high in bloody water speak to the ghosts of war pale, gray children talking in broken tongue seek the weak My eyes are weary of the everything I do speak to them They do kill me I do lie there,die there, My eyes are weary of nothing (1-2 min.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 1:01:00 AM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/14/2009 9:11:00 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Kalonji. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2009 9:07:00 AM
Very compelling, Kalonji! The "ghosts of war" speak to me as well and remind me how pointless acts of violence are. Happy Friendship Week! Love, Carolyn
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