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Crazy Town

Nightmare “X” a man called Vivid came to visit through the dark eyes of a killer people from here to there my teeth were falling out and I was spitting blood like a fire hose I was forced to smile to prove my dementia While crawling on the ground I picked up my teeth from the tile floor and put them in my front pocket Vivid took me to the carnival On the way he started bitching at me for not watching the “Christmas Story” marathon I see the roller coaster… Let me out before my mind explodes! Vivid began hitting me in the mouth with a steel pipe It was a bad trip but a trip none the less just another day in crazy town…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2009 11:50:00 AM
Oops! Not title. I mean your first line. Sorry, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:49:00 AM
Wonder by your title if this was about a nightmare. Been having some dark crazy ones myself. Pretty creepy stuff here. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 10:03:00 AM
loved your creativity... the day well told ~ Arany
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