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cracked

I'm dying in my heart
I'm frozen in my mind.
My breath refuses to start
My soul I cannot find.

Where do I even begin,
I can only know where I end.
The truth lies beneath my skin
I thought I knew, my love, my friend.

Am I me, or am I you
When I take a look to see.
It seems that mirror is broken too
A crack of nothing tearing me.

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  1. PAPYRUS Avatar
    KEITH PAPYRUS
    Date: 4/20/2012 6:59:00 PM
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    "am I me, or am I you" , wordsmith. Excellent write!
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    Matthew Hamilton
    Date: 12/4/2011 11:21:00 AM
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    So much of myself I see in this. Germane you are a wonderful person, stay true to yourself and you will see yourself in entirety and be happy with what you see. Love from the South.
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    Dan Kearley
    Date: 12/2/2011 4:55:00 PM
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    Some very powerful words you have wrote here...It reminds me of myself.
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    Sidney Hall Mad Poet
    Date: 11/29/2011 7:00:00 PM
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    A painful and searching poem Germaine. Be yourself that's all. Be happy and remember... there are people that truely love you for who you are no matter how far away. Lots of LOVE Sidney