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Below is the poem entitled cracked which was written by poet Germaine Elliott. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I'm dying in my heart
I'm frozen in my mind.
My breath refuses to start
My soul I cannot find.

Where do I even begin,
I can only know where I end.
The truth lies beneath my skin
I thought I knew, my love, my friend.

Am I me, or am I you
When I take a look to see.
It seems that mirror is broken too
A crack of nothing tearing me.

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  1. Date: 12/4/2011 11:21:00 AM
    So much of myself I see in this. Germane you are a wonderful person, stay true to yourself and you will see yourself in entirety and be happy with what you see. Love from the South.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 4:55:00 PM
    Some very powerful words you have wrote here...It reminds me of myself.

  1. Date: 11/29/2011 7:00:00 PM
    A painful and searching poem Germaine. Be yourself that's all. Be happy and remember... there are people that truely love you for who you are no matter how far away. Lots of LOVE Sidney