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(18/09/2011) Love is identical with couples Paper spread its space when the pen needs to settle a scribble When the dust get bored, wind will show-up and blow When the sun is stressed, rain will come as thunders brattle When fire is too emotional, ash reminds him to set low Can they get along forever? When the paper full filled, pen will leave it When it’s blown, wind will forget where the dust thrown After refreshed, the sun will shoo, rain is harassed When the ash takes control, spots of fire in black dust merely crawl ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Pasangan Cinta identik dengan pasangan Saat pena tertoreh, kertas membantunya Saat debu sedang bosan, angin meniupnya Saat matahari kelelahan, hujan menggantikanya Saat api terlalu emosi, abu memperingatkannya Namun mampukah mereka selalu berdampingan? Saat kertas terisi penuh, maka pena akan meninggalkannya Saat debu tertiup, akankah angin kembali menemukannya? Saat matahari bugar, hujan diusirnya Saat abu menguasai, api hanyalah hitam debu

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Date: 10/15/2011 10:29:00 AM
Poetry at it's best Dinda, a joy to read this Saturday :)
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:26:00 AM
This is your best work to date!!! Wow my dear sweet friend.... I am in awe with you wonderful tallent and skill as a true Poet... love and hugs Michael
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Date: 10/7/2011 3:45:00 PM
nice poem..you were on point
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Date: 10/7/2011 2:58:00 PM
way to go!!! You nailed this poem.. I love it!! thanks for all your comments on my work always greatly appreciated.. free spirit
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:16:00 PM
this is a really excellent poem. i love the imagery and the emotions it invokes in me. love the way you made the sun and rand and fire and ash and wind and dust and poetry all dance together P.D.
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