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Counting Sorrows

World of pleasure,world of pain;
Every things lost,nothings gained.
Hidden whispers,hidden lies;
Silent torment ,silent cries.
Heartless faces, heartless stares;
No one listens ,no one cares.
Scarred forever,broken-hearted;
Dearly beloved, dearly departed.
Broken promises,broken dreams;
Left alone, left unclean.
Live and let live,live and learn;
Once been bitten,twice you burn.
Tougher days,tougher tomorrows;
Counting costs, counting sorrows...
Carl Fraser

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 11:35:00 AM
    intensely written and descriptively rooted. a ride of emotions dark and wonderful... well done,carl!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 9:27:00 PM
    Carl never have adjectives and adverbs been so beautifully expressed into an obvious poingnent meaning. Wonderful!