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I'm fire and you're ice.
Saw your frozen heart, so I did what I do best- I set it on fire.
You told me you could drive no parent needed.
You told me we could be friends and never have to tell anybody.
You lied to me when you said you were twice my age, but at least now I know I'm not 
dating a 28-year old woman.
How old are you? Nineteen, twenty, twenty-one?
You're eighteen with a body of a Greek goddess and lips as full as the night's moon.
I'm still young, but so are you. How is this going to work out?
Is this true love or the Cougar Effect?

John Monteblanco
Cougar Effect

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  1. Date: 7/5/2011 4:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win John in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Cougar Effect" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 11:56:00 AM
    so are you only 16 then?? Wow, what a cougar effect!!

  1. Date: 7/3/2011 4:20:00 AM
    Good one, John. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/3/2011 1:55:00 AM
    John, I just love yours! Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 6:54:00 PM
    You sneaked in there John among all of those cougars and snatched a win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 6:21:00 PM
    Congrats John on your excellent win in the contest with this dynamic entry luv..happy 4th ...enjoy..

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 4:44:00 PM
    My congratulations on this win in my contest, I emjoyed it and congratulations, John

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 2:35:00 PM
    Very Nice!!