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"cool Shade"

The shade travels swift to shadow thoughts and savor till the sun awakens..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:55:00 PM

loving the touch ,,, i do not mind the sun asking me to wake up...lol...pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/30/2010 3:46:00 PM

Wow Michael.. such an elegant write..luv.. very expressive and loving..my friend.. enjoyed..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2010 2:18:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Looking forward to the shadows of evening..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:47:00 PM

Love how you used a double purpose for shade in this one! LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2010 7:29:00 PM

A nice haiku with fine images, Michael

Earle Brown

Date: 8/29/2010 2:47:00 PM

I love how the lines flows together with the corresponding sounds. Speaks well of nature.

Date: 8/29/2010 1:52:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words with us. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/29/2010 11:05:00 AM

Ahhhh....I like this a lot !! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/29/2010 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Mr F! Hope you enjoyed your time in the shade, luv Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2010 10:17:00 AM

Good Morning Micahel, and a wondeful Sunday so far. Kidding it is hot here in Texas. However we do need a little swift shade to pass us over. The nights here are to short to a savor. By the time we know it the sun is messing up the refreshing feelings. Loved your haiku,..p.d.