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"Cool Shade"

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"Cool Shade"

The shade travels swift
to shadow thoughts and savor
till the sun awakens..

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:55:00 PM
    loving the touch ,,, i do not mind the sun asking me to wake

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 3:46:00 PM
    Wow Michael.. such an elegant write..luv.. very expressive and friend.. enjoyed..

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 2:18:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work..Looking forward to the shadows of evening..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 7:47:00 PM
    Love how you used a double purpose for shade in this one! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 7:29:00 PM
    A nice haiku with fine images, Michael

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 2:47:00 PM
    I love how the lines flows together with the corresponding sounds. Speaks well of nature.

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 1:52:00 PM
    Nice use of alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words with us. Karen

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 11:05:00 AM
    Ahhhh....I like this a lot !! :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 10:46:00 AM
    Beautiful haiku Mr F! Hope you enjoyed your time in the shade, luv Wilma

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 10:17:00 AM
    Good Morning Micahel, and a wondeful Sunday so far. Kidding it is hot here in Texas. However we do need a little swift shade to pass us over. The nights here are to short to a savor. By the time we know it the sun is messing up the refreshing feelings. Loved your haiku,..p.d.