Convict

He thought it was the perfect crime, But now, alas, he’s doing time. For Susan’s Time contest

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Lee Ramage

Date: 9/8/2012 10:33:00 PM

Not so perfect a crime, but great poem. well done as usual Jack. Glad to see your name again. Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:15:00 PM

LOVE how you whipped this one up. It is GREAT. Congratulations, my friend.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/6/2012 1:02:00 PM

Belated congrats on your wonderful win, Jack, with your clever couplet! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:25:00 PM

JACK, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/5/2012 5:29:00 PM

Good one, Jack! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/5/2012 4:32:00 PM

Great write! Congratulations for a fine and clever verse! Cynthia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 10:23:00 PM

beautiful payback time, jack.. congrats with huggs! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/4/2012 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations Jack, you always manage to raise a chuckle as well xx

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/28/2012 5:31:00 PM

Funny... good luck in the contest! Terry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/28/2012 2:03:00 PM

wonderful! great for the contest, too!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/28/2012 12:25:00 PM

Ha ha, yes, this is what happens when you do the crime! He has plenty of time to think about what he has done...Just what he wants to think about, ha ha! Anyway, awesome write my friend, Great Work!!