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impossible obedience required as she melted with reluctance in familiar mystery a lonely splendor broken by bewildered whispers and weak hearts unite Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/20/2012 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Lay. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:21:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Never Look At Hearts As Weak Rather, I Only Look At Them As Pricelessly Beautiful ˜ Perhaps Because I Am Gazing Beyound The Surface & Into The Deepest Of Lights * I Love You Poem Beautiful Walayee ˜ Always & Forever, John!:) ˜
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:08:00 PM
very interesting verse! I very much liked this. "weak hearts unite" --interesting concept. Always, Laura
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