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CONFESSIONS OF AN UNCIRCUMCISED MAN

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CONFESSIONS OF AN UNCIRCUMCISED MAN

Confusing confusion has got 
me confused
Confused about where I 
wanna be- be-
 becoz I lie next to a being 
who insists I  disrespect her by 
not taking my " mortal hat" off  

Iam no mouse or human 
ratatoille
But   I have
Cooked and baked my own 
misfortunes
You see I have grown to knw 
the dominating male  fashion
No gentlemen- 
Not your chinos or your vans
Um talking about that deep 
lonely fashion
That horny everyday but can't 
get none from my woman 
typa fashion
That-  cold shower everyday  
typa fashion
That fashion that leaves a 
brother angry as hell- I guess 
they were right
"A hungry man is an angry 
man" 

Iam angry at my ignorant 
ignorance
becoz for sum reason I fear 
the thot of having a piece of 
me - in pieces 
For some reason though iam 
not religious I dare to  quote 
the bible  " what  God has 
joined together,let no man put 
asunder- nd that is my 
ultimate defence for this fence 
I have placed around my loins! 
But u see  the one I love has 
no tym for this nonsense..
she refuses to lie with me as 
does a man and his wife - 
All becoz I refuse to get under 
the knife!
Saying "babe um not about 
that life"
Surely my pride should  be 
circumcised
As will my PENIS
AfterAll circumcision is the 
mission!!! 

 And This has been THE 
CONFESSIONS OF AN 
UNCIRCUMCISED MAN!

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:42:00 PM
    The poem is realistic, I like the selected style of it. Great work hey. You might as well wanna check out mine.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 10:33:00 AM
    I like your frankness, your wit in articulating everyday life- your verve in taking moral issues head-on without warning, without apologising, without wanting to get praise for it... This is Susan I've come to know. You're a great poet my Sis. Keep it up. I enjoy your work!JM

    benjamin Avatar susan benjamin
    Date: 9/30/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much .. I do try