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Confessions in the rain

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Confessions in the rain

impassioned sky mumbles tasteless rain
a soaking measly carapace collects  muddy remains
weather overbears a confessing cloud.

For Carol Brown's 'Nature comes to life' Contest.

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  1. Date: 3/1/2011 7:13:00 AM
    Nice Haiku here!Congrats Rushda on your HM win----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 9:13:00 PM
    Fondest love for all the wishes.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:56:00 PM
    Rushda, congrats on your HM.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 1:13:00 PM
    Congratulation on this HM win in the contest of Carol, Rushda

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:45:00 AM
    Hello Rushda, Congratulations on your wonderful poem this has such depth about it. Enjoyed reading this today As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:32:00 AM
    Beautiful job Rushda! It's so great to see your success. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 7:35:00 AM
    Congrats Rushda on your HM in Carol's contest for this elegant entry .. enjoy your special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 7:12:00 AM
    Beautiful confessions.Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Rushda. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 12:44:00 AM
    Hello, Rushda. I like that "weather overbears" phrase a lot. Good luck in thec contest.LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 9:49:00 PM
    this is lovely but the syllable count is supposed to be 5=7=5 for a haiku for Carols contest, just a heads up