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Condiment Love Triangle

salt says hi to the sugar
Who’s in love with the pepper
Who’s the one who left the mustard
Who misses the ketchup
Whose kicks come from the hot sauce
Who truly loves the salt

Copyright © Matthew Horstkotter | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/23/2013 9:35:00 PM lol,,, I love the poem. and I love salt, and pepper... without them I can't eat....xox...PD Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 4/16/2013 10:41:00 PM Hmmm quite interesting and thanks for reading and commenting on my work. Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 4/16/2013 5:22:00 PM Good job, Matthew. Too funny. I had to think for a moment to see which is in love with whom, lol. Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 4/16/2013 4:12:00 PM I remember seeing an episode of "The Newlywed Game" some years ago where the wives were asked the question "What is your husband's favorite condiment?" Two of the women did not know the meaning of "condiment". An interesting write. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/16/2013 12:38:00 PM nice one and very different to most .. love it Mathew xx Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/13/2013 7:41:00 PM The spices and condiments of "life"...blending, interacting. iinterchanging...all necessary for full sweetness. LOL! That's my interpretation,Michael. May be completely different from what you had in mind, nevertheless, I have enjoyed much! Thanks for your kind comment on my featured poem. Enjoy your weekend! Annalise Login to Reply

Pa Ngalah Date: 4/12/2013 6:17:00 AM luscious and lovely, highly appealing to the senses... Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/10/2013 4:38:00 AM Thanks in advance for taking the time to read several of my poems. I have been late in returning the favor because I've been in the UK, on vacation. I'll try to get on the Soup more often though! Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/10/2013 4:31:00 AM Well this was a dose of weird for my morning... lol! In it's quirkiness I found it strangely appealing... it seems the condiments are all out of luck loving someone (thing) who doesn't love them back. Login to Reply

Goodness Lanre Date: 4/9/2013 5:44:00 AM I can;t help salivating. Good lines there. GL Login to Reply Goodness Lanre Date: 4/9/2013 5:45:00 AM I like the title of the poem too.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2013 8:10:00 AM ... lol ... who like soup without salt .... - Pleasant poem Matthew! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

J.W. Earnings Date: 4/7/2013 2:17:00 AM Hey! What a sweet, salty poem yah got here. Excellent write!! Thankx for your comment on my poem. I appreciate the support. xD Well! Have a wonderful week! Login to Reply