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Commitment

Commitment I could see the mist rising off the cool lake The leaves had changed colors and fallen on the crowded forest floor I sit and watch as the world around me is changing before my eyes But change is something I have yet to accomplish. My life I have committed to a fantasy There is no change when all you know is gone Mental pictures bounce around with no escape And the past you knew is the future you seek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/16/2010 9:05:00 AM
Profound write, we only realise what we had once we lost it..
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Date: 10/11/2010 4:30:00 PM
love the last line sarah x
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