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Comes the Fall

The days grow shorter Leaves rustle beneath my feet Hearth and pen beckon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 8:26:00 PM
Lovely, Barbara! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:50:00 AM
Barbara...nice win, xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
This paints such a cozy scene. Congrats on your HM, Barbara! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/8/2013 6:01:00 PM
congrats on your win BG
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara!Very good senryu and in 5/7/5 too.
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:10:00 PM
Barbara , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:27:00 PM
I believe This one would be recognized as textbook Gorelick had it been entered without names.... Great writing... Jake
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:43:00 PM
I love this one, especially that last line. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 11/6/2013 10:03:00 AM
This is very cool, BG. Thanks for visiting~Brad
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Date: 10/12/2013 10:53:00 PM
I felt like I was nearing the end of the autumnal equinox. I love it.
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Date: 10/3/2013 7:44:00 AM
Write on my friend..Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Some of my pants no longer zip so I had to go up a size..Sad..Everything around the middle..Chocolate is a good food item to put on the weight..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2013 5:27:00 AM
This is an awesome write BG, love the unexpected ending as well :)
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