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Comes The Fall

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Comes The Fall



The days grow shorter Leaves rustle beneath my feet Hearth and pen beckon

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Lovely, Barbara! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Barbara...nice win, xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
    This paints such a cozy scene. Congrats on your HM, Barbara! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 6:01:00 PM
    congrats on your win BG

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Congratulations Barbara!Very good senryu and in 5/7/5 too.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:10:00 PM
    Barbara , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 7:27:00 PM
    I believe This one would be recognized as textbook Gorelick had it been entered without names.... Great writing... Jake

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 3:43:00 PM
    I love this one, especially that last line. Congrats on the winners' list.

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:03:00 AM
    This is very cool, BG. Thanks for visiting~Brad

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:53:00 PM
    I felt like I was nearing the end of the autumnal equinox. I love it.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Write on my friend..Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Some of my pants no longer zip so I had to go up a size..Sad..Everything around the middle..Chocolate is a good food item to put on the weight..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:27:00 AM
    This is an awesome write BG, love the unexpected ending as well :)