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Comes The Fall

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Below is the poem entitled Comes The Fall which was written by poet Barbara Gorelick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Comes The Fall






The days grow shorter
Leaves rustle beneath my feet
Hearth and pen beckon

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  1. Johnson-Saunders Avatar
    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 11/11/2013 8:26:00 PM
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    Lovely, Barbara! Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/9/2013 10:50:00 AM
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    Barbara...nice win, xox~ LINDA
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 11/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
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    This paints such a cozy scene. Congrats on your HM, Barbara! Love, Kim
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    Joseph May
    Date: 11/8/2013 6:01:00 PM
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    congrats on your win BG
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    kash poet
    Date: 11/8/2013 8:30:00 AM
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    Congratulations Barbara!Very good senryu and in 5/7/5 too.
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    SKAT A
    Date: 11/7/2013 11:10:00 PM
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    Barbara , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
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    John Posey
    Date: 11/7/2013 7:27:00 PM
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    I believe This one would be recognized as textbook Gorelick had it been entered without names.... Great writing... Jake
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/7/2013 3:43:00 PM
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    I love this one, especially that last line. Congrats on the winners' list.
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    Bradley Finken
    Date: 11/6/2013 10:03:00 AM
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    This is very cool, BG. Thanks for visiting~Brad
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    Jake Ponce
    Date: 10/12/2013 10:53:00 PM
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    I felt like I was nearing the end of the autumnal equinox. I love it.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/3/2013 7:44:00 AM
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    Write on my friend..Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Some of my pants no longer zip so I had to go up a size..Sad..Everything around the middle..Chocolate is a good food item to put on the weight..Sara
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 10/3/2013 5:27:00 AM
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    This is an awesome write BG, love the unexpected ending as well :)