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Come With Me

You question why I wish to live In isolation among the wilds, Forsaking all society gives And its lure of ventures beguiled? To answer this I can't decree In words what lacks simplicity Instead, why not come with me To taste my eccentricities. Come with me to stand Atop a snowy mountain's peak To gaze at miles of virgin land The beauty of which words can't speak. Come, let it strip away your cares And then perchance you just may dare To feel the peace that's waiting there Atop that snowy mountain fair. Come with me and walk Along a winding river's brink To listen to the wood thrush talk Or watch a doe come out to drink. Come, watch the beaver's clever craft Then pause to hear what few men have Come stroll along that peaceful path To listen to your spirit laugh. Come with me and run Through golden fields of flowing grain Then pausing there to fill your lungs Take time to smell the windblown plains. Come, watch the merry butterfly Float 'cross an amber colored sky And hear the earth give out her sigh As now the day says his goodbye. Come with me and sleep And lay beneath the star strewn skies In timbered heights, so dark and deep To find repose for weary eyes. Come, think of all you've seen today Of Mother Nature's grand display And once we have knelt down to pray Then let your dreams come out to play. Then arise with the sun And return to society To work until the day is done On another man's proprieties. Think then of our day gone past And of these questions you've asked You'll know then why I'm an outcast Who's chosen the more tranquil path. Timothy I. Brumley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/17/2011 10:39:00 AM
My weary eyes find rest in your words. Needed rest!
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:35:00 PM
With the flavor of Walt Whitman, Timothy! This is One I had not seen yet. I'm glad I decided to check out another of your entries in the first round of the Soup contest! A great poem for nature lovers. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Tim. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:26:00 AM
I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today Timothy. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:35:00 PM
good flow in this, enjoyed the read
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:29:00 PM
I wrote this poem during a two month trek up the Sierra Nevada trail with just me and my 75 lb back pack. I had just come back from overseas after a three year tour in Tokyo Japan. I was tired of concrete, and people, and noise, and smog, and clocks! Loneliness and starvation finally drove me out of the hills in the end, and so the pendulum swings.
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:47:00 PM
Excellent write that speaks to me all the way through of your love of nature and open natural spaces...The rhyme and rhythm is good...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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