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That thing that can't go away that earning that hopes for a better day, That fantasy that's free from the mind that longing that waits for your love. Are you coming? are you half way? I am waiting by the doorway then you knock when I have given up gone inside and locked the door I hear your voice calling but can't let you in, I feel your breath in the stillness you bring still can't let you in, Me in my empty room you standing at my door waiting... I know you are still there Don't wait for me to let you in just come in and find yourself a sit a place I am not hospitable when you know my weakness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 9:52:00 PM
Very dramatic write I enjoyed.....Larry
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:25:00 PM
our availability of weaknesses lol it never fails, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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