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Come Back

talking out of lies,
walking into skies,
maybe you're right, i'm alone now

mountains to climb,
slides to slide,
no more time, forget the broken vows

and when you come, 
shadows of promised happiness follows.
still stings where it left me hollow
still numb,
leading you to the awaiting gallows

Maybe you were right, theres no more hope for me
maybe I was right, somewhere, theres the key
i dont know or care whether we'll ever agree
All i know is you failed to see
the truth, the signs, the obvious,
and it hurts, to know...
I still want you back

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  1. Date: 1/21/2009 3:13:00 PM
    I welcome you to POETRYSOUP where you are amongst great company. I invite you to read some of my work...Raul

  1. Date: 1/20/2009 4:47:00 AM
    Welcome to the Soup. Love the flow of this piece. Love sometimes know no bounds. Good job.

  1. Date: 1/20/2009 4:45:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup. Keep writing and sharing your poetry with us Rina. You write from the heart and that is where good poetry comes from.Love, Carol