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Just come along With me on this road not so long A road that is very short To learn a little about my world of all sort! Come along and read The things that are here for us to lead Ourselves and others to the promised land Which makes us look like magicians with the best wand! Come along and correct me Where you notice flaws that be Then do not fail to commend The ones that are straight and not bend! OH God my Creator The Lord of the world and Saviour Make these lines beneficial And not make me a lamb sacrificial!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 7:26:00 AM
Good.very good.. " I liked the end line : not make me a lamb sacrificial!" This line gives power to whole poem. thanks to share
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:34:00 PM
Adesina Idris Dolapo ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
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Date: 11/28/2012 9:11:00 AM
Adesina nice plea...David
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