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Below is the poem entitled COMBUSTION which was written by poet JOSE VELAZQUEZ. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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It's a slow soft introduction,
To intense sultry seduction,
Entering worlds
Of heart pumping productions.
That have on more then one occasion,
Lead to total physical destruction.

And still we go there,
Cause we've moved beyond the point,
Where either of us care.

It's all about taking our time,
And getting things just right.
So we can enjoy the rapturous flavors,
Of reaching our climactic heights.

Mmmm baby kiss me one more time,
Mmmmm baby kiss me three more times,
Just one more time!
Baby kiss me again.
Let's see how many laws of gravity,
Our love making can bend.

Cause I swear!,
We are flying.
Flying to places,
Not even the sun and moon could go.
Transcending the heavens,
To only a place,
You and I could know.

Some would call it a miracle,
I just call it us,
Doing what comes naturally,
Enjoying moments of passion,
Till we both combust.

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  1. Date: 8/3/2011 6:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Jose. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jose. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 6:34:00 PM
    Congrats JOSE on your featured poem this week on PS... magnificent one to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:34:00 AM
    Wasn't sure where to put an interpretation // answer so Hope this will do. Basically Yes I am arguing against religion by trying to show that thru history the track record of Gods kind of cancels out the fact that there can be 'One True' and that each system of belief lifts tenets from the last (Christian // Pagan merge as an example) + a contrast with science and my personal belief that anything can happen entire universe we literally know nothing about. Hope that helps :)

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:34:00 AM
    Brilliant , "Let's see how many laws of gravity, Our love making can bend." love those lines ...

  1. Date: 11/27/2010 3:46:00 PM
    TIC, TIC, BOOM! Very explosive piece! Love it... Lay

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 8:42:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight with its theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and fantastic.. check out the contests too.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 9:31:00 PM
    Hey man very descriptive poem, loving the emotion..Combustion is a perfect title,and thanks for the advice ill take that to consideration.