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Coma

want to lie here forever in this place where you never leave hidden here for so long fate made you breathe made me find you all over again to wake is to hurt unconscious is comfort where i never have to let you go forever is not long enough i will hold you till time can no longer be measured till we both forget that this isn't reality till I no longer have to wake from sleep drowning in this coma water composed of you won't fight the waves won't hold my breath just let go into you so i never have to let you go again J.Hart 12/08/09

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Date: 5/20/2011 12:06:00 AM
Joshua... CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,.. Linda
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, joshua
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week joshua. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:48:00 PM
I really really like this way to go Fantastic
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:36:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Mr. Hart. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Linda
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun... check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...
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