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Colors of Dawn

Colors of Dawn by Amy Swanson Peach-gold tones shimmer -- mist from twilight disappears kiss of sun peeks through swirls of pink and lavender bids a gentle good morning

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/25/2011 10:57:00 PM

Soup mail..

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/25/2011 10:50:00 PM

Enjoyed the write Amy,

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2009 12:12:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL! LAINIE

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/21/2009 11:28:00 AM

Beautiful scene painted with your words. Great job...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 3/20/2009 9:47:00 AM

Lovely writing Amy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/20/2009 7:33:00 AM

Sweet soft write. Vince

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2009 8:34:00 AM

Your colorful sunrise is an awesome sight to behold. Your picture is painted so well!

Michaela Payne

Date: 3/19/2009 8:31:00 AM

Amy this is so beautiful. I felt like I was watching it. So gorgeous your words are so perfect. Wonderful write my friend. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/19/2009 7:48:00 AM

Wow. Gorgeous! It is so gray here, this a lovely respite from the dreary. Lovely! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/19/2009 7:27:00 AM

Love the perfect pastel image this poem creates! Lovely, Amy! ~ love, Carrie

Daver Austin

Date: 3/19/2009 6:27:00 AM

Oooowwwwm this is so tender, soft and colorful. Love it. Love, daver

Arany P.

Date: 3/19/2009 6:02:00 AM

this is outstanding... each line outclasses eachother! i love the nature too... its so vast... and the dawn is my favourite of all... wish i could stay up one day and watch the peach gold and the swirls of lavender... excellent tanka!! take care, Amy! ~ Arany

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/19/2009 5:43:00 AM

I can read your work all day---