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Colorless

I slid down a rainbow that's colorless screaming fables till the fountain poured bright..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2012 10:31:00 AM
so true Michael....feelings and emotions so jumbled up here....u did that in just few wrds...ur emotions streaming out like furious flood, wild but silent, serene , not violent, aaah wonderful !....if ur a fly then u sing with poetic tune...like a dazzling moon..!
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Date: 11/21/2011 4:33:00 PM
so imaginative and ultra creative Michael luv.. took this ride with u all the way .. amazing visuals..xoxo.. J.G. needed this ride luv..
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:39:00 AM
I love the two last lines... Awesome, Michael :)
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:00:00 AM
i like it, you captured the fun side of a rainbow and the colors it brings, cory
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Date: 11/19/2011 8:47:00 PM
Very interesting one, Michael!! Me likes!
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Date: 11/19/2011 1:00:00 PM
I love the imagery and the message is so uplifting, Michael. A delight to read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2011 11:59:00 AM
I love this!!!!!!Excellent my friend!!!
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Date: 11/19/2011 11:36:00 AM
wonderful Tetractys Michael.Enjoyed.
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