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Colorless

I
                                                       slid down
                                                      a rainbow
                                                   that's colorless
                           screaming fables till the fountain poured bright..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2011

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Red Fiery Date: 1/11/2012 10:31:00 AM so true Michael....feelings and emotions so jumbled up here....u did that in just few wrds...ur emotions streaming out like furious flood, wild but silent, serene , not violent, aaah wonderful !....if ur a fly then u sing with poetic tune...like a dazzling moon..! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/21/2011 4:33:00 PM so imaginative and ultra creative Michael luv.. took this ride with u all the way .. amazing visuals..xoxo.. J.G. needed this ride luv.. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/20/2011 9:39:00 AM I love the two last lines... Awesome, Michael :) Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 11/20/2011 9:00:00 AM i like it, you captured the fun side of a rainbow and the colors it brings, cory Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2011 8:47:00 PM Very interesting one, Michael!! Me likes! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/19/2011 1:00:00 PM I love the imagery and the message is so uplifting, Michael. A delight to read! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/19/2011 11:36:00 AM wonderful Tetractys Michael.Enjoyed. Login to Reply